tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392347102742479757.comments2010-09-10T13:13:50.091-05:00rose's spacerose/runserhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10892026786259132418noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392347102742479757.post-81643097258141311002010-09-10T13:13:50.091-05:002010-09-10T13:13:50.091-05:00Glad to hear your safe, cant wait to hear more adv...Glad to hear your safe, cant wait to hear more adventures from you, hopefully better ones!Alicynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12474874585359157785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392347102742479757.post-84167766136501538602010-09-10T10:08:19.802-05:002010-09-10T10:08:19.802-05:00Sad, Rose!! At least you made it there! :) I think...Sad, Rose!! At least you made it there! :) I think you just needed the long cry...I would probably cry after all that, too.<br /><br />I'm sure it will get better once you're used to it...and once you find some sexy Italian man who you can share spaghetti with. Take lots of pictures and keep blogging! We miss you in viscomm!Erin Semplehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13188618317754611181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392347102742479757.post-46378578309351397762009-09-09T12:07:38.497-05:002009-09-09T12:07:38.497-05:00Hi Rose,
Yep, you need a concept. Think of the hea...Hi Rose,<br />Yep, you need a concept. Think of the headline as a device to stop the viewer and express the "catch". It should relate to the illustration/graphic/photograph. It should contrast or compliment the visual. The arrow idea could work if you give it some structure - make an arrow of arrows. Don't do the descending from the typeface thing. Decide on a grid and use it. Your information has no reason to be in the layout where it is. It is random.<br /><br />All the elements are roughly the same scale. The hierarchy is weak.rose/runserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10892026786259132418noreply@blogger.com